Monday, April 30, 2012

Sunlight and Mystery - Got Writing?

The sunlight made me shade my eyes. I couldn't see the man in front of me, only his outline.


"Who are you?" I asked.


I heard something click and took a step back. A bead of sweat dropped down my back. The heat was baking me.


"Please, who are you?" I asked again.


With a flourish he pulled back his cloak and stepped to the side so that I could see him.


"I am... "

And so it begins in the heat of... of... what? Finish this scene in 100 words or less. Winners to be posted next Friday, the 11th.

Environment is a big part of world building and world building is what writer's do. Whether it's the world of a sixteen year old girl in suburban New Jersey in 2008, a fifteen year old boy in 1936, Sunnyside Queens, or a halfling with furry feet and approaching a youngish 50 in the Shire of Middle Earth. Each of these worlds needs climate, physical landscape, smell, and sound. These aspects of the world your characters live in make it come alive in time and place (even if it's a paralell world or fantasy world). We smile at the familiar (the smell of coffee, the sound of chalk on blackboard, the feel of spray from waves crashing at the beach), and imagine the bizarre (just how big is a cyclops and what does a siren sound like?).

More than anything, environment helps shape character, even if the characters aren't aware of it. It tells them what to wear, how to interact, what the rules of society of the world they live in require.

See if in the writing prompt above you can bring your vision of the world that I have begun into the story and see how it shapes what the man in the cloak is about to say.

- Joe

Wednesday, April 25, 2012

got inspiration?

Music is one of my big inspirations. When I'm writing, I'll often put together a play list that gets me in the mood of my character.

Here's a clip of one of my favorite songs of all time, Fleetwood Mac's "Silver Spring." The relationship between Stevie Nicks and Lindsey Buckingham is one of rock's great love stories and this video always inspires me when I'm writing.






What music inspires you?

~Shari

Tuesday, April 24, 2012

got winners?

Thanks to everyone who entered to win Roseanne Parry's Second Fiddle.



We were able to give away two copies and the winners are...

sparrowthoughts (Susan Maas)
and
Simply Heidi

Please e-mail us your mailing address (gotteenfiction@gmail.com) and we'll send out the books.

And scroll down the blog for some great writing prompts.

Thanks, again, to Roseanne for appearing on the blog and for donating two copies of Second Fiddle.

~Shari

Monday, April 23, 2012

Got Books You Love?

I’ve found some of my biggest inspiration through the books I love.

I wrote The Girl Next Door after re-reading The Catcher in the Rye. I was so moved by the relationship between Holden Caulfield and his dead brother, and I wished that I could read a story about them – a prequel.

My subconscious must’ve been especially taken by the idea of using a life-threatening illness as a backdrop for a story, because I woke up the next morning with the words, “Jesse’s dying” in my head. I actually said them out-loud!

Then I said, “Who’s Jesse?”

My subconscious had the answer – and the entire novel, just waiting to be put to paper.

What’s your favorite book? What’s its theme? Today’s writing prompt invites you to think about this, and then write an opening paragraph to a story inspired by that book you love.

I hope you’ll share your results with me. I’ll be looking for yours up until next Wednesday, and I'll post the winner(s) on Friday, May 4. When entering, please tell me the name of the book which inspired your entry.

Hey, you might wind up with a whole novel.

I did!

Enjoy,
Selene

Friday, April 20, 2012

got winners?

Thanks again, got teen fiction writers for all your submissions. 
Our winner today is Dave S.  Nice work!
      


One of the hottest up and coming local bands, Sisco Lane, needed a lead guitarist. I'd been preparing for this for weeks, months--to the point of blisters.
      Auditions were today. 
      Now. 
      Teddy Sisco, the bassist and leader of the band, jotted a few notes after the last guy. He had totally owned his song choice.  
     The competition was legit and I was just as good as any of the other guys. The slight advantage they had over me was that none of them made out with Vicky last night. Vicky, now seated next to Teddy, had failed to mention that the two of them were going out.   
      "Dennis, you're up. Let's hear what you got," Teddy said with a strange edge in his voice. It was as if he was daring me to blow it.
      I grabbed my guitar and took a seat up front. Vicky shot me a seriously flirty smile and an icy panic gripped me. For the first time this afternoon, Teddy seemed annoyed, impatient. Shit. Did he know about last night or were the auditions just starting to wear on him?
      I strummed the first chord, closed my eyes and...



poured my heart and soul into it and didn't make a single mistake. The rock gods were watching over me that day and then Teddy spoke.

"That was excellent," he said.

I felt such relief it was like I could actually breathe again. All I could do was nod in appreciation.

"But this whole situation is not going work," Teddy continued.

I stared at him incredulously.

Teddy stood up and muttered, "Vicky, you're a slut."

"What did you say?" Vicky shrieked.

Through gritted teeth, Teddy said, "I don't like you, Dennis, but you're hired." Then he slowly turned around to face Vicky and he said, "Get out."

At first she didn't budge but then Teddy tipped his head toward the door and Vicky stomped away giving him and me the finger.

by Dave S.

*****




Scroll down to yesterday's interview with Amalie Howard and enter to win Bloodspell!


Scroll down to April 12th's post and enter to win Second Fiddle by Roseanne Parry! 


Good luck!


Karen

Thursday, April 19, 2012

Interview with Amalie Howard

Today we’re interviewing YA novelist Amalie Howard – author of Bloodspell.

Amalie grew up on a small Caribbean island where she spent most of her childhood with her nose buried in a book or being a tomboy running around barefoot, shimmying up mango trees and dreaming of adventure. She received a bachelor’s degree from Colby College in Maine in International Studies and French, and a certificate in French Literature from the Ecole Normale SupĂ©rieure in Paris, France. She has also lived in Los Angeles, Boston, and New York City. She has worked as a research assistant, marketing rep, global sales executive, freelance writer, and blogger. A lover of other cultures and new experiences, especially of the culinary variety, she has traveled extensively across North America and Europe, and as far east as China, Indonesia, and Australia. She currently resides in New York with her husband, three children, and one very willful cat that she is convinced may have been a witch’s cat in a past life.
I’ve met Amalie a few times (we shared the same awesome publicist and did an event together in Boston at the Cambridge Library - that's another story for another time) and she’s as cool as her bio makes her out to be. She’s also a fencer (though she tells me she’s out of practice – hah!) and has given me an open challenge to fence, any time, anywhere (gulp!). If she’s anything like her protagonist, Victoria, I better work on my parries … now.

For those who don’t know, here’s a short synopsis of her debut Bloodspell from Goodreads:

The spell was simple... ''Cruentus Protectum'' (''Defend the Blood'') But what do you do if your blood is your enemy? Victoria Warrick has always known she was different. An outcast at school, she is no stranger to adversity. But when she receives an old journal for her seventeenth birthday, nothing prepares her for the dark secrets it holds--much less one that reveals she's a witch with unimaginable power. What's more, when she meets the dazzling but enigmatic Christian Devereux, she has no idea how much her life is about to change. Enemies will hunt her. Friends will turn on her. The terrible curse that makes her blood run black will stop at nothing to control her. And Christian has a sinister secret of his own... Without knowing whom to trust, can Victoria survive her blood's deadly desires? Or will she lose everything, including herself?

Joe: I think titles are a real challenge for writers to come up with (at least they are for me). When did you figure out the title for your book?

Amalie: In Victoria’s world, her blood is the source and strength of her magic, but it’s also a creature with a will of its own that will do anything to control her. I liked the thought of Bloodspell because it combined the power of the blood with the underlying thread of magic binding it all together. The title was brewing throughout the gestation of this novel, but I’d have to say I had a true idea of it after a few rounds of editing.

Joe: I’m so envious. I’m curious about your main character, Victoria, but having read Bloodspell I have to say you have a wonderful cast of secondary characters. Besides your main character, who do you find most intriguing?

Amalie: I would probably have to say Lena, believe it or not because I think she’s going to be very misunderstood in this novel. After all, she’s a baddie and Christian’s ex. But that said, I briefly mention in the novel how she grew up with seven brothers and spoke nine languages, and could fight with all manner of weapons. I find that intriguing and incredibly badass for a girl! Plus, she chooses to become a vampire—I’d be interested in knowing what would have pushed her to make that choice, and of course learn about the things that drive her. Does she have heart or is she really as cold and heartless as she seems? Lena would definitely have a compelling story of her own!

Joe: Lena is indeed badass with a capital B. I, for one, would enjoy reading a novel about her. Let’s jump a bit to reviews. Your novel has been well reviewed (see my review on Goodreads) and I know you enjoy hearing especially from your YA readers. What’s the best email or review you’ve ever received from a teen reader?

Amalie: This was a review of Bloodspell from a 13-year-old teen, Shara Safer. It was so articulate and well written that I was blown away. It’s still one of my favorites.

“I thoroughly enjoyed reading Bloodspell.  It was a gripping read that I could not get enough of. I read it from beginning to end without even looking up. I love it when a story can take hold of you like that. It feels like you are being tossed up and down in a whirlwind, never knowing what will happen next.
First, unlike many written-for-teen novels, Bloodspell has in its favor outstanding quality writing. There are no long-winded descriptions of the gorgeous vampire (Christian) that are intended to draw in giggling females. Amalie Howard, the author, instead describes the action and people’s feelings realistically. My personal favorite character, Angie, undergoes a change during the book. She starts off as moody and resentful, but afterwards her moods are explained. The reader can understand and sympathize with her as the book progresses.
Another thing that I highly endorse in Bloodspell is the main character. Victoria is not just the ditzy, helpless, and pretty girl-next-door you find in other vampire books. Nor is Victoria a mere mortal, she is a witch. As a feminist, I appreciate the way Victoria is able to defend herself. She has no need to call on her vampire boyfriend at the first sign of trouble. Instead, she can just summon up her own magical powers and kick the bad guy’s butt. I love strong female characters.”

Joe: I agree with Shara about your protagonist. Lena may be badass but Victoria is kickass badass. Okay. On to writing. What advice do you have for teen authors when it comes to writing a novel?

Amalie: For any aspiring young writer, I would definitely encourage reading as many books as you can get your hands on—the more you read, the more you’ll understand all the elements required to pen a great book. Develop and experiment with your own unique writing voice, and find what moves you. Which writing genres and themes are you passionate about? What drives you? Do you like stories, poetry or journalistic writing? Find your niche—people are usually better at writing about what they love or what inspires them because it comes from somewhere real. I would also advise young writers to get writing experience early, even if it’s something as simple with working on your school newspaper or starting a blog or getting a local internship. A good rule of thumb is that any experience is valuable experience, and if I’ve learned anything at all, it’s that this industry values credentials. Get yourself out there and write regularly—hone your craft. Don't let rejection hammer you. It's all part of the process. Take in the constructive and make your work the best it can be. Lastly, the most heartfelt advice I can pass on to other writers is to never give up. Believe in yourself and your work, and you can’t fail.

Joe: All great advice for writers of any age. What about when you have trouble writing. What do you do when you get writer’s block?

Amalie: It’s a toss-up depending on the day. Sometimes I literally force myself through the wall, but that’s probably the worst way to deal with writer’s block. It works for me because I work well under pressure. On other days, when the wall gets the better of me, I step away from what I’m working on and come back to it when I’m less frustrated. It could be as much as a few hours to several days. I may also ask my critique partners to read what I’ve written to brainstorm on ideas and to get the creative juices rejuvenated. Oh, and cupcakes. They always help.

Joe: I love cupcakes. But I don’t want to let them distract me. Let’s talk a little about getting published. What is the thing that has surprised you most about publication?

Amalie: In terms of the overall process, I really didn’t expect the publication path to be so long. I mean, people said it was long, but I must not have paid any attention. Note to new authors: when they say it’s long, understand that to mean it’s really, really long. The actual book took me about three months to write. We're talking about three months for the—in Anne Lamott's words, the crappy first draft—and then came a few more months of editing, then some time off, then some more editing. I’d probably say give or take a year or two to really polish the manuscript into ship-shape, and then another year and a half to see it in print. So yeah, it’s a long process.

Joe: Thanks Amalie, for taking the time to speak to our readers today and good luck on the sequel, Bloodcraft, coming out in 2013.

Amalie’s give-away is a double-header: a signed copy of her kickass badass novel, Bloodspell, and a sterling silver Bloodspell triquetra charm – winner take all. Contest closed May 1st with winners announced May 3rd.

The rules are simple:
  •         One entry if you comment on this interview.
  •       One entry if you are or become a follower of this blog.
  •      One entry if you tweet about this interview.
  •       One entry if you post on facebook about this interview.

For more information about Amalie and Bloodspell take a look at her websites:

Bloodspellbook.com (Bloodspell website)
&
Amaliehoward.com (Amalie’s blog on writing and all things Amalie)

Now... about that fencing match...

Wednesday, April 18, 2012

got inspiration?



"What no wife of a writer can ever understand is that a writer is working when he is staring out the window." 
~~Rudolph Erich Rascoe 


Same goes for husbands, kids and significant others!!!


I hope you find your muse and have a productive writing day!


~~Karen

Monday, April 16, 2012

GOT WRITING?




Social Media. Facebook. Twitter. Google Plus. Pinterest (okay, I don't even know what Pinterest is, but I keep hearing about it). Then there's texting. So many different ways to communicate.

In my novel, Change of Heart, and in other things I have written, I often use these methods of communication. A book about teens wouldn't be real without its presence. Some would argue that using specific sites can date a manuscript as what's hot changes constantly (can you say "My Space?").

What do you think about the use of social media in middle grade and young adult novels?

For today's prompt, write a 100 word or less interchange between two characters, using any social media you would like.

Prompts should be e-mailed to: gotteenfiction@gmail.com. The deadline is Wednesday, April 25th. The winning entries will be posted on the got teen fiction? blog on Friday, April 27th.

Good luck!

~Shari

Friday, April 13, 2012

Got Metaphors?

Here's the answer to the whose metaphor is this challenge:


Quotes:
1. Considering the fact that they were inside a thousand-foot-long 
airship made from the life threads of a whale and a hundred other 
species, it hardly smelled at all. The scent was like a mix of animal 
sweat and clart, like a stable in summer. 

b. Goliath, Scott Westerfield

2. Far down the maze of ducts, Sloth was cranking away at a 
winding drum, sweat bright on her skin, blond hair pasted slick 
to her face as she sucked the wire out like a rice noodle from 
a bowl of Chen's soup ration. 

c. Ship Breaker, Paolo Bacigalupi

3. Dead leaves crunched beneath his feet like sharp teeth on 
bones, and the moon cast blue-black shadows all around that 
looked like monstrous figures eating unspeakable living buffets. 

d. Return to Exile, E.J. Patten

4. I have what looks like the outline of a normal boy's ear, 
but it's pressed down into the flesh, squashed like potter's clay. 

a. Stick, Andrew Smith
And the winning entry for the metaphor challenge is from M.V.L.
He had a woman on each arm. Each wore a clinging dress that 
shimmered like stars as she moved.
- M.V.L.
- Joe


Thursday, April 12, 2012

GOT AUTHORS? An interview with Roseanne Parry



Today we have the privilege of featuring Roseanne Parry, author of the picture book, Daddy's Home and the award-winning novels, Heart of a Shepherd and Second Fiddle.

Roseanne has offered to give away two (yes, TWO) paperback copies of Second Fiddle.

The rules are: 1) One entry if you comment on this interview
2) One entry if you are a follower or become a follower of this blog
3) One entry for each of the following things: tweeting about this interview or mentioning it on Facebook.

The winner will be drawn on April 24th. Good luck and thanks for spreading the word!

And now, our interview with Roseanne:


1.   Any advice for writers starting out?
In the 10 years before I had books under contract, I made up my mind to pick three contests to enter or grants to apply for each year. It helped me think of myself as a professional writer and got me in the practice of meeting deadlines and putting my writing in a professional format. Eventually I managed to win a few of the contests, and when I was awarded a work-in-progress grant from Oregon Literary Arts, I knew I was on my way. I started looking for agents at that point and signed with Stephen Fraser at the Jennifer DiChiara Literary Agency a few months later.

 
2.  Is Second Fiddle auto-biographical in any way?
None of the events from the book are in my life, but I did play the violin when I was 14. I stopped for many years but returned to it when I started writing the book to get my head in Jody’s character. My youngest two girls play piano and violin and over the course of writing the book they became old enough to play duets and trios with me. I love making music with them and they joy of it did much to inform my understanding about how Jody feels about playing in the trio with her friends, Vivian and Giselle.
I never ran away to a foreign country with my friends though. Even now I tell my parents if I’m traveling out of the state. :-)

3. What’s the best email or review you’ve ever received from a teen reader?
It wasn’t a review, but I had a conversation with a reader recently who said that Jody in Second Fiddle had inspired her to practice her piano every day instead of fighting with her mom about it and practicing only two or three times a week. She’d been playing piano all her life and although she loved music, she wasn’t sure the piano was really the right instrument for her. We had a nice chat about how a musician finds her voice and style of music. She felt like she was ready to make her own decisions about what she wanted from her music, and talking about the book helped her have that conversation with her mom. I LOVE that about books. I think the conversation that happens in a family because of the book is far more important than anything that is actually in the book.

 4. Did your children, spouse or significant other read your novel? Their reactions?
My husband never reads my work when it’s in progress. If he reads it when it’s done, he never tells me what he thinks of it. And in return I never comment on his electrical design when I see a building he’s worked on. :-) My children, on the other hand, read my work all the time and sometimes I have to go hunting for yesterday’s pages under their beds amid the yucky socks. Fortunately for me, my children are all better spellers than me, so I am very grateful for their frequent help with proofreading.

5. What is the thing that has surprised you most about publication?
My favorite thing about the publication of Second Fiddle is learning how many people in the book business are also musicians. My agent plays the piano and sings, my editor is a drummer in a rock band. All three of us remembered how being a musician as a teenager was empowering and helped us find a group of musician friends.
My favorite memory from touring with the book was the afternoon I spent at the children’s room of the New York Public Library. I did a children’s event in which I played duets with  some violin players who were 5 and 7 years old! It was such fun and a huge honor to be a part of a young musician’s very first public performance! My editor stopped by with his guitar and after the event the two of us found a quiet corner of the children’s room and he taught me how to do improv. I’d  never tried it before, but it was such fun.
Since then, I’ve found a session in Portland that takes beginners. I go once a week and learn Irish jigs and reels with no written music, just listening and chiming in. It has proved very helpful in my next book which is about a family that makes Irish music together.


Thanks, Roseanne.

If you are in the Portland, Oregon area and would like to meet Roseanne, she is doing an event at Powell's Books on April 13th.

Here's the info:

Book Fan Friday is a workshop for kids 10 to 18 years old who love to write. This month, Stasia Ward Kehoe (Audition) and Rosanne Parry (Second Fiddle) collaborate with a group of accomplished young singers and dancers to present From Stage to Page: Writing about the Arts, a discussion about how to make arts a compelling story.
Friday, April 13th @ 4:30pm Powell's Books at Cedar Hills Crossing
3415 SW Cedar Hills Blvd. (800) 878-7323 

For more on Roseanne, visit her website http://www.rosanneparry.com/ or to learn more about States on Pages go to their website http://www.stagesonpages.com/ .  



Tuesday, April 10, 2012

Blocks' Anti-inspiration Inspiration

“If you want to write fiction, the best thing you can do is take two aspirins, lie down in a dark room, and wait for the feeling to pass.” 
 Lawrence Block, Writing the Novel: From Plot to Print


Lawrence Block is a funny guy and his advice is spot on. He writes this knowing how hard it is to write and how crazy it is to spend all your waking, unattached, specially created, free time sitting at a computer trying to fill a blank screen with words that tell a story that resonates with truth. Writing is challenging, mind-blowing, nerve-wracking, frustrating, wonderful, fulfilling, creative, magical work.


What he doesn't say - what is even more interesting to me - is what do you do if the feeling doesn't pass? 


I'll tell you.


You get up, turn on the light, and get back to work.


Because if you're a writer... you write. 
- Joe

Monday, April 9, 2012

got writing?

     
      One of the hottest up and coming local bands, Sisco Lane, needed a lead guitarist. I'd been preparing for this for weeks, months--to the point of blisters.
      Auditions were today. 
      Now. 
      Teddy Sisco, the bassist and leader of the band, jotted a few notes after the last guy. He had totally owned his song choice.  
     The competition was legit and I was just as good as any of the other guys. The slight advantage they had over me was that none of them made out with Vicky last night. Vicky, now seated next to Teddy, had failed to mention that the two of them were going out.   
      "Dennis, you're up. Let's hear what you got," Teddy said with a strange edge in his voice. It was as if he was daring me to blow it.
      I grabbed my guitar and took a seat up front. Vicky shot me a seriously flirty smile and an icy panic gripped me. For the first time this afternoon, Teddy seemed annoyed, impatient. Shit. Did he know about last night or were the auditions just starting to wear on him?
      I strummed the first chord, closed my eyes and...


Will Dennis get the job or blow the audition?  We can't wait to hear how you finish the scene!


We'll take submissions through April 18th and post the best ones on April 20th. Email them to us at gotteenfiction@gmail.com


While you're here, scroll down to March 29th's post for details on how to win a signed copy of my novel, A Closer Look. 


~~Karen

Friday, April 6, 2012

got winners?

Thanks to everyone for your killer first line entries!

Here are my top two picks:

"Everything changes the day the cops come."  By Carol Anne Shaw

and

"I will NOT share my room with a chicken!"  By Lisa Reiss

Nice work everyone! Ever since I ran this prompt I've been thinking of everything that happens in my life as a first line. That could be a good writing exercise, too. When something happens to you, or when someone says something to you, or when you say something - imagine it printed on a page. You'll give your imagination a jump start!

Thanks again for participating and reading this blog :)

Selene

Monday, April 2, 2012

Metaphor This!


"Those words are most pleasant which give us new knowledge. Strange words have no meaning for us; common terms we know already. It is metaphor which gives us most of this pleasure." Aristotle

I know, I know. It's not the day for Got Inspiration. It's Got Writing Monday. So I do have a prompt for you but I've got a challenge too, of another sort - at the end - before the prompt. But I had to start with Aristotle. He's a dude.

Metaphors are cool. According to About.com there are 13 different types of them from mixed metaphors to submerged metaphors to visual metaphors. For any metaphor though the idea is to make a comparison between two unlike things that actually have something in common. A metaphor expresses the unfamiliar in terms of the familiar (About.com; metaphor; Nordquist, Richard).

Metaphor's make your writing sing. Overused they can stick out like a sore thumb (overused metaphor). But used just right they can activate powerful imagistic areas of the brain. I just made that word up. Here are four short quotes with metaphors. Can you match the quote to the book/author?

Quotes:
1. Considering the fact that they were inside a thousand-foot-long airship made from the life threads of a whale and a hundred other species, it hardly smelled at all. The scent was like a mix of animal sweat and clart, like a stable in summer. 


2. Far down the maze of ducts, Sloth was cranking away at a winding drum, sweat bright on her skin, blond hair pasted slick to her face as she sucked the wire out like a rice noodle from a bowl of Chen's soup ration. 


3. Dead leaves crunched beneath his feet like sharp teeth on bones, and the moon cast blue-black shadows all around that looked like monstrous figures eating unspeakable living buffets. 


4. I have what looks like the outline of a normal boy's ear, but it's pressed down into the flesh, squashed like potter's clay. 

Match to Book, Author:
a. Stick, Andrew Smith
b. Goliath, Scott Westerfield
c. Ship Breaker, Paolo Bacigalupi
d. Return to Exile, E.J. Patten

So here's your writing challenge for this week. Come up with a metaphor using 1-2 sentences, no more, that create an image for us that will light up our occipital lobes. We'll take entries through Wednesday April 11and post the winner on Friday, April 13.
- Joe